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My All Around Me Poem
Posted on May 29th, 2008 at 4:31 pm by room02 and

All around me my beady eyes see…..
A calm majestic sea ready for me.

All around me my wide open eyes see….
seriously weird people looking at me.

All around me my curious eyes see….
rabbits bouncing happily.

All around me my vicouse eyes see….
pollution vicously conquering the steadily.

All around me my anxcious eyes see….
A quiet young baby sleeping peacfully.

All around me my horrified eyes see….
plastic floating in the deep blue see.



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Link Here | June 9, 2008,

I liked how you did a poem. Why did you decide to do it on all around us. I think you should do another poem

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Livvy


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