Posted on May 29th, 2008 at 4:28 pm by room02 and
All around me my gloomy eyes can see,
Loyal laughing friends with happy families,
bubbly parents cheering happily around,
Shyly stars in misty nature sleeping soft and sound,
Relaxing noises steadily swaying in the stunning night,
Vicious seas stunningly destroying all that`s in sight ,
Life jumping carefully with weird stunning seas,
Movement with insects swaying with the trees,
Majestic colours playing proffesionaly in the sky,
Natures birds flying high while travelling by,
Now you can see what i can see with bubbly smashing life…
Link Here | June 9, 2008,
I think it is an awesome poem with cool ryhming! I thought you should of made it an acrostic poem, but I still loved it! I think you are an EXCELLENT author!!!!!
From Nina room06
Nina
Link Here | June 9, 2008,
I think your poem is awesome! I thought you should of made it an acrostic poem, but I still loved it!!! I think you are a greaat author!!!!!
From Nina room06
Nina