Room Two Talks
Just another Learnerblogs.org weblog
 
 
Ahhhhhh Theres A Monkey In My House!!!!
Posted on May 29th, 2008 at 4:41 pm by room02 and

I creep in the cat flap, I hear something. Footsteps I think. They’re getting louder and louder. Suddenly the footsteps stop. I walk into the house a bit more and surry to a chair. The footsteps start again, Ihold my breath. I feel the thumps on the floor. THUMP THUMP!! The person is walking around the corner to where I am. I think the person can see my tail. By the way I’m a monkey. I hear a scream. Yup shes seen my tail. “ouch, ouch”. Shes hitting mee with something and it really hurts. I climb out from undernaeth the chair. “ahhhhhhhhhhhh”, screams the lady! Woah little lady watch it, yuo could’ve really hurt me that time. I run left then right looking behind me to whats going to happen next. I run into a room, BANG she hits me again. I’m not quick enough. I swerve and swerve, I stop, I turn around and shout, I’m only here to get something to eat. I see some chips and I bounce up onto the table. I grab the chips but the lady sees me. BANG she hits me a third time. I better make a run for it, I can see the door, I shout! I sprint to the door screaming HOORAY and like the speed of light i’m out of that dump. That was my day. ” oh drats he got away, bellowed the lady”!



Comments so far:

Link Here | June 9, 2008,

Hi i like your story a lot.I awso like your title.And title

Bella


Link Here | June 9, 2008,

I loved the bit when the lady kept hitting the monkey.How old was the lady?I love your story.

Emily


Link Here | June 9, 2008,

Hi i like your story a lot.I also like your title.And your backrounds

Bella


Link Here | June 9, 2008,

I liked all the adjectives. how did the monkey get in the house? it is very funny.

Lucy


Link Here | July 4, 2008,

i like your story! but i don’t know who’s it is? Other than that it was funny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :O :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :L :L :L “L :L :L :L :U

TeAna


RSS feed for comments on this post.
TrackBack URI

Share your thoughts

Line and paragraph breaks automatic, e-mail address never displayed, HTML allowed:

<a href="" title=""> <abbr title=""> <acronym title=""> <b> <blockquote cite=""> <code> <em> <i> <strike> <strong>

(required)

(required)


*
To prove you're a person (not a spam script), type the security word shown in the picture.
Anti-Spam Image

Sign up at Gravatar.com to personalize your comments!